not much plot or any action
just some gingerbread men this looked good from the title but this was really boring nothing actually happened just some music and well a street with a lift it needed to have some dialogue and a purpose to it
This is for GCSE animation, the subject was on change. I did the the opening credits, the first, second, fifth, seventh, eighth scenes and ending credits. Don't ask whyy they are gingerbread men! I don't actually know myself!
not much plot or any action
just some gingerbread men this looked good from the title but this was really boring nothing actually happened just some music and well a street with a lift it needed to have some dialogue and a purpose to it
ok?
so is there a point or you just felt like spending all that time animating this? needs a little more plot than "gingerbread men have a blackout. we got the point in the first scene. needs a consequnece ... probably not schrooms...
and how many people worked on that?
Christ i really hope you failed because that was shite. i was doing much better animations in my spare time at your age. my god did that have any point what so ever...you could of at least had a psychedelic shroom skipping gingerbread ultraviolence scene...
This looked like a great deal of work
I know everybody seems to be picking on your characters and yeah they could use some work. Yet, the techical aspect of your work was really well orchestrated and directed. Its not a simple thing to have lights flicker out and interchangeably turn off. I can see some fantastic skills growing out of this.
The only problem I have is the replay button got quickly removed. You need to put a stop(); on the action bar specifically on the frame with your replay button.
You did a great deal of hard work and it paid off both the lights and your music work together. That actually is a great deal of an accomplishment.
Amatuer Work
It's obvious you hadn't been using flash for very long when you made this. If you intend to make more, you really need to work on not just your flash skills, but also your graphic ones.