This stuff belongs on youtube
not newgrounds....when I was young, I had a video camera too, and I did some pretty lame stuff as well. And I applaud you kids for doing something creative, doing something different. But I don't applaud you putting it on Newgrounds. This site is mainly for flash animations. I know that rarely videos pass, but not often. as for the video itself it was different ..that's for sure lol. The audio peaked a few times, try to stay farther from the mic when recording your voice. I don’t know if you did it in post, or if someone was standing right above the camera talking into it. But if you record the audio and then put it in, PLEASE check to see if it peaks, I'd rather it be too quiet, at least it doesn’t hurt the ears lol
nice try, you'll get better in time..but seriously...youtube, not newgrounds lol