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At the Bus Stop

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OOOH NOOOO A BUS STOP enjoy ^^

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This just isn't that good.

Now this does have potential, as the idea itself was pretty neat, but aside from the concept itself, this movie is very lacking. First of all, these days unless you have an absolutely incredible stick themed flash, people are not going to like it. The animation was bad even as far as sticks go. Also, it was too short in my opinion, but mostly the graphics is this movie's weak point. Maybe spend some time working on the graphics, and you might have a decent cartoon.

lordaiken responds:

well this was ny first animation in a year! i didnt think it would get thro!!

lol

that was funnnnyyyyy, *claps hands like a reetard*

lordaiken responds:

thanks?

It was tad short

It was too short but everything else was good!

lordaiken responds:

Ty man migth remake it one day

Could be improved.

The stick-man movement was jerky and the whole flash was too short.
But, I did like the concept of a bus stop that killed people. ;D

lordaiken responds:

well thats what happens when your board in science

omfg!

how in the hell was your file size so f'ing huge? was it because of the song? anyway that was pretty much shit. sry to say but it was. it was however a pretty good idea. if you can get better at animating, ( the stick dudes are fine, you dont need to change 'em) then you should remake it. definatly make it longer because that was the main reason why it was bad. no story. omfg a bus stop. omfg it killed them. rofl how funny. longer better and longer. the keys to success

lordaiken responds:

i didn't want to lose music quality :( i might remake it one day. hmm yea if you thought it was funny WHY DID YOU PUT 0 FOR HUMOR! lol

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2,076
Votes
11
Score
2.84 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 15, 2006
2:39 PM EDT