...oooooook, not bad...

Computer voices always crack me up, so I actually watched this a few times. Of course I've come to realize that none of this makes sense, but hey, not too many things on NG does anymore...umm, kinda average, a little below...

It made me smile. Not great, but definitely underr

I liked the style of the graphics - nice lines and shapes. Fonts were cool too.

My one criticism is the key, which looks like it's pointing behind him - it doesn't look like it's at an angle with the end where it's meant to be.

The 'b' made me smile, as did the actualisation of the product.

However, it just wasn't enough to get me laughing. At the end, I had the 'eh, is that it?' feeling. 2 problems - sudden end and not as funny as it could be. Maybe even ending with some big flashy letters on star shapes when you're talking about the pricing and tel. # would help with the former. Maybe taking it to more ridiculous heights, maybe showing it being used publicly, would help with the latter.

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It made me smile. Not great, but definitely underrated imo.

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~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, the lock soup character was neat have not seen that one ib awhile besides the clock version, but you did a good job on it, as for the short it was funny.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it somewhat longer.

~~OVERALL~~
Funy and short.

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Lol, pretty cool

I liked the part with the thing and when that guy did that thing with the stuff... Good times.

B JOKE. LOL.

i <3 this one.
does FART-B-GONE/GAS-B-GONE work on humans?
2 in violence due to the key.