Well, it's been a good while since I've submitted here.
Here we have a project from TAFE. This one is a community service announcement, ie. it had to sell a point eg. drugs, littering, STD's etc... Anyway... my choice was second hand smoking.
This project was quite limiting though. It had to be researched, it had to be dramatic (get a reaction from the audience), it had to be not a frame longer than 8 seconds (6 for the ad, 2 at the end for the "super" ie. message), it had to be made to TV specifications (DV PAL (768x576 for square pixels, 720x576 with proper pixel ratio)) and be action title safe. *phew* Oh, and it had to be animated in anyway you saw fit.
Please excuse the crackly sound, the microphone I used was sketchin' out at the time.
*IMPORTANT*
Well, anyway, this isn't supposed to be taken as a serious campaign against smoking, to be honest, I really don't care one way or the other. This was purely for school. This sketch popped into my head as soon as we got the sheet for it. It's supposed to get a laugh, simple as that, nothing more, nothing less.
Enjoy
LOVED IT.period.
i aint no reviewer or somthin .. i dont even know how to use metaphores
fuck that rating a comment is shit
i always get a useless fuckin weigh on my comments
anyways this was a great educational enviromental intellectual flash
.. i already rated it 15/15 ,i liked it .. i dont have to do a speech about how great it is lol
newgrounders are complete dorks lol
har
good and to the point yadayadayada
the graphics were good too which is a good bonus but i do think its a little short would amke a good tv ad though
Short and to the point.
__The Good__
This flash has a nice moral to it. I have seen a lot of these smoking kills flashes lately but yours is probably one of the best. Pretty good style to this flash. The graphics were great and very detailed. The music was good too, nice elevator music! Sound effects were pretty good but there wasn't a lot of them. I also liked there was some violence in this flash and it was pretty funny.
__The Bad__
It was way too short. Even though this flash was good, it could have been a lot better. It was also pretty obvious what was going to happen. You could have made this flash a little more creative.
__Over All__
Over all this is a nice flash. It may have been short but the graphics and music were great! Next time just make your flashes longer and a little more creative. Good job making this flash, keep up the good work!
zeen
Lol, wow... This vid is short but it makes its point. Good thing second hand smoke doesn't cause us to spit out... uhm... say, wtf did he cough up anyway? :-/
Short but sweet
Very short, but very good. It went straight to the point and wouldn't waste anyone's time "if" they didn't like it. Graphics were nice and I put humor 5 because I laughed when he fell over and died. I don't know if that was suppose to be funny, but I didn't see it coming...especially right away. Good job. ^.^