Umm..

How do I say this..
Too bad is about a love story, but good stroy-line..
I think you should do more.. like the rest of the song..
And, the random bit in the middle with no music playing.......

The animation could have been better, but good anyway.
=]

Ehhhh....

it leaves a lot to be desired

man

im soz, dude, u have potential but i dident like it, but i dident blam it, so... lets see if ur lucky