J+M for the win

I love the look on Mels face when he gets smacked with that phone.

5.5

Just to let you know, your preloader did not play properly. I love the idea of simplistic animation backing up a crazy little interesting plot. In this movie, two characters work in an office and one has fun at the expense of the other. What will happen? Will he get revenge? The character designs are sticks, about could use a little touching up. Their movements were well done, but the stand-out was the background. I liked the black and white, with the contrasting read on the table at the end to spice things up. A good use of sound effects, with widely beloved humming nod from Kill Bill as the centerpiece.

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it was pretty good

i would try to fix the play button tho

Not bad..

..But next time you really should have a better joke, like Yurimarcel said. Your animating isnt that bad, it looked decent to me, its just the joke wasnt as funny. Good luck on your next one though!

Not so bad

It was not so bad, but next time try to make a history or a better joke.