There is a lot wrong with this

First off I'm going to comment on the soundtrack. When the music picks up into that hard rock it doesn't end, which leads me to believe that you didn't make the layer that music track was on into a "stream" and have a "stop" key frame at the end of it. Also, why hard rock? Why not some crazy bongo drums to go with what's happening in a scene? That's a mistake many people make, by putting in music that they LIKE instead of what fits.

Another thing I'm going to comment on is the one still shot of the shark you kept on using. I would go back and animate his tail and his gills atleast go give him better movement. Using a still over and over again and just moving it around with tweens is incrediably boring and will lose interest to your audience.

But you did have some nice drawings, so you do have skill there. All I suggest is to keep at it and when you work on something submit it in a place where people can critique it, like the NG Mags section. That and keep practicing at your animating. I hope this critique helps.

Not bad.

Nice little short movie. I thought it was kind of funny and creative!
Hope to see more!

Not Bad

this wasn't a bad job at all. I liked it matter of fact. the design and the graphics were very well done and I do have to say I enjoyed the sound as well. Not many people do very good voice overs but yours was very nice. i agree with the reviewer before me though, add somesort of play button on that shark, sadly it took me a minute to realize it was there because I wasn't really paying attention. but other than that it is a nice short.

Good, but...

You need to add play somewhere on the shark or below it. It's good, but I had already voted on it before I found this out. Remember to do this with your next flash. Hopefully this won't get blammed.

It's not that it stopped...

it's that the shark-play button doesnt say 'PLAY' so it confuses people. It may affect your score, which is too bad because this is good. :)