Awww Come-ooon...
My Diagnosis: Dude, not to be whiny, but you left out the most important parts, including the books he wrote toward the end, also the book having to do with Joan of Ark was HIS favorite, it was good but I'm just sayin man, if your going to call it The Life of Mark Twain then at least make it the ENTIRE life of Mark Twain, seriously. Other than that it was not bad, just try not to use so much stock music maybe. Keepa tryin!:D