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Mark & Tim's Top 5 Diets

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Ever tried to lose weight but you were too lazy? Ever got stuck in a doorway at a party? Ever wished to make your anarexic body just that little bit skinnier? Here is the answer to the world's questions put together in a 5 min flash movie.

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Sound is a little... off

The five diets had me rolling on the floor laughing and when my mum walked in and saw the 'personal sadist' she was more than a little freaked out. Good work.

As a whole, the movie is good, but I'm going to pick up some key areas where you can improve this.

There is no lip-sync, but you don't appear to need it, you just move the mouth as a whole, rather than part of it trying to form the sylables as they come out of the character's mouths. A bit of a cheat, but I'll let it ride.

The characters look a little like manakins which artists sometimes use to make skeletons for life drawing. Maybe you could 'flesh your characters out' a little bit, their movements are slightly jerky and disjointed.

The final point is the sound. It seems that you've used too much bass for the voices and it sounds a bit muffled when I listen to some of the characters, particularly the bodybuilder.

^_^

:P that was sorta funny

Pure Brilliance!!!

Bravo Man, Bravo... (All hail Mark &Tim)

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Jul 15, 2006
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