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SMB - Mario's Demise 1

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I KNOW I SPELLED STRONGER WRONG. I was just too lazy to fix it. Please judge fairly, it is one of my first flash novies. Please only use Constuctive Criticism in reviews.

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Nothing New

It was an ok flash, where do you get that music during the fight sequence? I really like that music.

SprizzGuy responds:

I got it at ocremix.org. The song is Bowser is Pissed, it somewhere in the super mario section.

Not really that new.

Many people are doing things like this and it gets old after watching many submissions like this. I like the flash because of the sounds and sprite motions but I felt that this was kinda short. But it was ok.

Unoriginal yet decent Flash.

I swear I have seen that kind of storyline about a hundred times already. It's not that catching... But still, you made good use of those sounds, and the sprites and motions are great.

SprizzGuy responds:

It will become original in later episodes, just keep watching...

Slow Motion?

You actually used slow motion in this? Matrix Slow MO went out of style a long time ago, its becom eboring and uninteresting.
BTW: the flash is kind of boring, it has no suspense and has nothing interesting about it, it starts and ends thats it, no ups, no downs.

SprizzGuy responds:

It'll get better... I thought the slow-mo was a good touch but I guess not.

Oye.

You were too lazy to fix something as simple as a typing error? Such a sad story… Maybe it’s just me, but this movie just seemed to serve no point aside from possibly furthering what you might be making into a series. If you hope to make more, please put in the effort to make it the best it can be. One of the hardest types of movies to make good, are sprite ones, and sadly this production is just another one of the mediocre masses of them.

SprizzGuy responds:

I was too lazy to fix srtonger because it was in a movie clip with 2 transitions in it and I didn't feel like making a whole new movie clip to fix a word that you would understand anyway.

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Jul 11, 2006
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