not bad one

Author's comments:

This was based on a birthday present that I wrote\painted for my girlfriend. It's kind of child-ish, but fun nevertheless. ...I hope.

My comments:

Well, your hopes were good... it was a little childish yes, but it was still cool to watch and good for a first animation as well. the drawings could've used a touch-up, but it still cool... and i hope your girlfriend liked it too, and im sure she did.

K

^^Good Points^^
Dude, I thought for sure this would come out of judgement with a 3.00 score, atleast. 1.96?!?! This is just appaling, since this is really a cute movie and I liked it a lot. The storyline is really funny, and having characters like a spoon, bowl of soup, and an evil knife just make it that much better. The animations were pretty good, and the sound effects were good as well. I really liked the ending as well. This will go on my favorites list for sure. I just find it so cute...I'm sure your girlfriend loved it!

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings aren't great...mainly the background drawings. Put some more details or just random objects in the background to give this more substance to it. Just having blank backgrounds with just earth and sky doens't really look that great.

that was like some straight up tomogachi shit

it needs a lot of work. try harder bro

SUPER CUTE!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!! WOOO!!!!

WOOOOOO!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!! SUPER CUTE!!!!!! yay zack! *\o/*

Awww

Dude, I think that was so sweet, ok I am a bloke who loves blod and guts and all the rest of it, but I was truly touched by that animation's magic, in my opinion, I think it could be re-done, and made really epic, with perhaps an elegant sounding narrator, like you get in childrens programs. That would most definately make me cry. Bless that spoon. I hope the knife dies in a tragic boating accident...