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After about half a year of on and off work , Stick Doodle 2 is finaly complete, brought to you, the awaiting audience by F15H Productions.
It needs work.
I think you just need to learn to make things self-explanitory, and stop cutting the video to make your characters explain everything. It makes the characters feel fake and reminds us that it's just a movie. If you let the show go on, the viewers will most likely get sucked in easier.
On a side note, when a joke is dead, it's dead. And try to make your jokes harder to see coming. If you can see a joke coming it's like you've heard it before. When you first think up a joke keep thinking about everything, like how can you make the joke harder to see coming, or more shocking.
oi,, that was shat
I could pull better animations out of me arse hole.
Animation was crappy, it was completely incoherant. Didnt make any sense what so-ever.
An it got really boring in the middle. After like the first 30 secs you wonder what does this have anything to do with a stick doodle?
my only prob with it was that i couldnt read the text,
and to me that was the wrong music. but it was a good stix flix
That was the most confusing thing I have ever seen....and that's why I liked it! I mean, the triforce thing was completely out there, and I really got lost at the worm hole thing....but it was all too funny for words.
It's ok.(better than mine)
I'm sure this one will make it. Mine's almost definitely going to be deleted. The animation was plain, but i liked it anyway.
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