Lacked/Liked

nice premise it worked and i thought you did a good job of presenting the story, try fixing the music though it was sort of annoying after a while which didnt do it any favours

~DeIvL666~

Could use a few upgrades

A few upgrades such as some compression but just abit, and you could use some better quality sound, it would greatly improve on this flash, i thought it was a good idea for a flash so nice job.

Abit more quality next time.

~X~

nice, but...

The voice acting needs to be much clearer...er, uh yeah anyways other then that everything was awesome. (The jokes would make much more sense with the voices clearer)

Hahaha

You know what, that wasn't nice, but it made me laugh.

Another "fake preloader" gag ?? or failure?

load bar was at about 3% when the flash finished loading and the vote was enabled .
Fake Preloaders have be done to death.