good work asshat
naw man its not bad for your first submission better then it was keep going man
Author Comments
I spent some time trying to get everything right. This is one of my first flash animations. Hope you like it.
well
i guess it was medeoker at best ok dawg
aight peace
pretty nice
the voice was a little soft and the graphics could use some improvement, but otherwise I like the idea! I hope to see more.
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great for a frist time i hear, had good graphics and it was funny and creep at the same time lol well there to make it look like if it really there well have fun and gl
Reminds me of a Family Guy gag.
Pretty good for a first Flash. It gets the ideas of layout and scene progression well enough. It's a good gag, too, but it reminds me of a less macabre version involving hookers on Family Guy. When Peter counts the hookers in Cleveland's house.
"One, two, three, four, five, six, seven!"
"Seven! Seven hookers!"
"That does it! Peter, you and five of those hookers get OUT OF MY HOUSE!"
I do feel, though, that a lot of it could have been more refined. The Count really stands out against the photographic pixelated background, but not in a good way. It gives it a very unpolished look, and I think that if the style between background and foreground were more consistent, it would give this Flash a more solid delivery.
Some of the voice acting isn't registering. Maybe a take two would be needed on the recording, and a more projected voice.
That's about all, though. As far as early Flashes go, this one's pretty well done. Not so much aesthetically in my opinion, but definitely with that distinct "new animator" smell.
*Sniiiiiiiff*...Aaaaah.
Final Grade: B.
not-well-liked responds:
Hey man, thanks.
About Family Guy, i love that show, I may have gotten it from there, but I think i got the idea before I saw that. I've been sitting on the idea for awhile, just never got around to making the flash. I've still got to do better animations, I'm going back to college to learn more about flash and flash websites, so hopefully you'll see a big change in my submissions over the next year or so. Also, wut do you use for audio? I didn't have a computer mic or a audio booth, so I had to use my Mini DV camera's mic and import it on the computer using Adobe Premiere.