The graphics are pritty cool in this flash and it looks like alot of time has gone into it, well, to me anyway.
The intro did take abit of a long time, so, work on making that shorter.
The music worked well when it was used, that was good and it didn't sound off, YAY! Points for you there.
However, some of the talking in parts was alittle weird, it could have been improved to make it sound alittle better maybe? Work on voices some more.
Overall I liked this somewhat.