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This is my first ever flash movie... erm... i made it in 6 hours and would appreciate any comments?

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Good flash

Work on animation and graphics but all-and-all a good flash

Funny movie. . . but

There's room for improvement, the artwork isn't THAT bad, it could stand a bit more detail and more subtle outlines, maybe a little more natural shading and a little less of the radial tool too.
I liked how you made your character roll instead of hop, as ball Clock's generally do, and I couldn't help but laugh at the part where Rupee was taking a shit :D
The humour was good, and the concept was flawless, but you just need to improve on the art and animation a tad, it looked like you were using 12 - 14 FPS, use 24, a higher framerate will make your animation look much better.

its ok

good concept. but you need to get better at drawing first. experiment with little flashes that you don't submit. and try everything.



It was ok. I guess.

Nice first Flash Maddawg. :)

Could be better.....

it needs a better story line....

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3.38 / 5.00

Jun 19, 2006
11:59 AM EDT