Well...
It was a commercial so can't expect much from it. But good luck with your project !
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This is the second version. I got a hold of the vcam and decided to spice this up.I feel like it definitely adds to it. I also edited the graphics on mario somewhat. For anyone actually interested in this, my tablet is packed up, so the full toon will be a bit longer coming. thank again.
-Captain Computer Crash
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This is the commercial for the series john roggers aka my56k, will be doing with me. It's a mockumentary series about the lives of video game characters. We're planning to pull no punches on it, this commercial is very tame compared to what we have planned. I cut some things to get it out to you sooner, then again this is my first flash,so I don't expect it to become too popular. Any things I can improve for the full series, let me know.
booooooooring. It could easily get better.
I found the part with Sonic slightly funny, and the Mario wasnt bad but jesus they both sucked. No offense, but don't quit your day job.
Reality.
Booooooooooooooooooooooo. Enough said.
Please for the love of the god people stop messing
up good jokes for lame random puns. For example Mario could've had a gameboy advance in his hand and the interviewer could've have said "show me in the game" and mario would play the game but on the screen would show mario being raped by Bowser(not graphic) I'm not trying to be sick but show on the doll has been done to death.(just some hump sound animations)
supersonic4336 responds:
haha, interesting idea, but i'm not big on the whole mario raping or being raped thing. Although.....we'll be doing something very wrong indeed in the first episode. Wrong yet danced around like a lady in a spanish ballroom. Trust me, I conferred with the actors and put some serious thought into the first episodes script.twill be funny.Merci buckets btw for the review. -DR
It's quite sad...
...when the Co-Writer reviews his own movie. Meh, anyway it's a start, but music and subtitles for the interviews are a must! All I could catch was Mario's paranoia. About what I do not know. Keep at it.
supersonic4336 responds:
Actualy he had nothing to do with this movie. He didn't start contributing until I started to write the first whole episode. Which is probably why I was stupid enough to miss the subtitles on that scene. I'll have to fx that, since the whole series will have subs. Will have music also. This is very trimmed down. thanks for the comment btw - DR
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