fun to watch
not bad for a first flash and that little guy kinda looks like a tooth
Author Comments
This entry might be a little too cute/girly to last long in the portal, but it's just a little something exploring colors and simple facial expressions in creating mood. It's a frame-by-frame (I really don't know anything, let me just say right now) and I'm not going to say anything about loaders, etc... I hope it works, and I hope it lasts!
By the way! I'm not sure who to list for audio credit! I'm so sorry, if the audio file is yours please please please tell em a.s.a.p. so I can credit you. I know I got it from the audio portal.
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That's rather sweet, I like it. LIke the music too. Done very well, I must say.
McMiesty responds:
Thanks so much. :) Rather sweet is what I was going for. :)
=D
this made me smile.
possibly because i'm a theatre major....=P
but this was really good. great job! you're reinforcing my belief that you don't need alot of "flashiness" to create quality flash!
McMiesty responds:
I was inspired by theatre, of course... So power to the theatre-kids! I'm glad you share my love. :)
SPLENDIFOUROUS!
THAT WAS ONE OF THE MOST BRILLIANT FLASHES EVER! I LOVED IT! It was brilliant because,it wasnt too ott or complex, it was apsolutely side splitting and fabulous (and ive got a good sense of humour but its not huge)! I couldnt stop laughing and being inspired . I loved the way your character was shaped like a marshmallow or tooth. I loved every second and i think every one else should as well and thats why i voted this flash a five!
McMiesty responds:
Oh my god! Thank you SO much! I hope you're not too high... ^ ~ Thank you so much for that awesome review and score! I'm working on the second, new and improved one so check back please!
Woah, only 1.9?
Hey now, I think this deserves more than that. The amount of work you have obviously put into this shows that you could be quite talented, and just haven't gotten there yet.
Graphics: They honestly wern't bad at all. Yes, it was a cheesy frame-by-frame, but your drawing skills are actually very good. I think if you worked at it for long enough, you could produce actual fluid f-b-f animations that would be very enjoyable.
Style: Very cute, and very well drawn. I think you could have some real talent here, please keep working at it. You could go somewhere with this.
Sound: Only really big drawback I saw. You really need to compress audio before submitting, that flash could have easily been around 400k or so. Good song choice anyway.
Violence: None needed.
Interactivity: Play button.
Humor: A little silly. Nothing that made me crack or anything like that, but I enjoyed it.
I really think you could go somewhere with your style. You have definate potential as far as drawing is conerned, and you're going in a very artistic and wonderful direction (frame by frame, original characters, etc). Hell, if you get good enough, I'd like to see this little square guy in his own features that hit frontpage. Keep at it and I'm sure that's where you're headed.
McMiesty responds:
Thank you so much for such extensive feedback! I'm amazed at all the positive reviews, and the survival of the actor. You've said some really encouraging things, and hey, once I get some skills, I can't wait to recognize the potential. Thanks. :)