you could do better

firstly leave him alone coderaven 2ndly no its not very good but you can build on it i know its hard but try to get real voices but it is hard so dont worry if you cant. also the back grounds arent excaly amzing so try to make them better.last thing try and rate it propally because this is sooooo not
Suitable For All Audiences.

Sucked

Way to completely rape the series. This was a lame attempt at even trying to be funny. I want my time back from watching this piece of crap. Your flash animation skills are poor at best. Come back when you have talent.

ha ha ha

is so funny

Booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Tell me when it's finished.

Enjoyed it

The killing of the white mage was a little un-needed. seriously. But it was cool anyways, can't wait till it's finished, spelling does need some work and the language could stand to be expanded a bit. like a bit less cursing could be good, they should only curse when it's to show how serious something is, not to joke around ok?

oh yes, cut that intro to about the last part of it with your name, the name sliding back and forth and stuff just seems like an excuse to apply some effects into the movie that are otherwise useless. If you don't want to change that, then you can always make a "skip intro" button somewhere.

one last thing, I'm a slower reader sometimes, especially after 12:00 midnight, be nice if you could choose when to advance to the next message, but it's probably not important.

keep up the good work and get it finished ya hear.