Hi, Here is the 4th episode in the series. Be sure to leave your comments and thoughts as i was dissapointed to see episode 3 got no reviews. I hope you enjoy this as much as the last if not more :)
WARNING: contains mild violence
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...................Why the hell is the name short attention 4, with a short attention span, how did you make it passed one, and more importantly, who let you.{creative using clay though, even if it wasnt good}
Ouch! That was painful.
The movie was a bit jerky at the beginning. When I pressed the replay button, it should loop back striaght to the start of the clip and not the loader page. Consider using voices and subtitle together than just plain background music.
Still, the characters were simple but well crafted and colorful. That one stab of the pencil earned u a 7 for violence! Good job.
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I guess you are referring to the audience with the title. This flash seemed to be composed of two seperate flash shorts, the first was ok and the second was mildy disturbing. I have to say that i did like the music but i thought that it would have benefited alot more from a cast of voice actors. You did however do a good job with the pencil in the head scene.
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(Kiss my ass XwaynecoltX)
Well, it was an OK claymation.
Well, explaining the craphics, it was a slightly below average claymation. Try making it actual people, not just retarted shapes. Style, well, it was a claymation, not stressing this enough, it was not very origonal. The sound was kinda funny, but it was also goldfinger. Violence, anyone who watched it would know wht I mean. Interactivity, the play buttons and replay buttons were good, but you should try adding pause buttons and stuff like that. Humor, again anybody who watched the movie would know what I mean.
3/5