ok....
it was ok but two things you messed up on:
1.'end' was a typo.
2.it should be longer.
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
My second CC short. Vote fiven, like Orange Clock would have done.
ok....
it was ok but two things you messed up on:
1.'end' was a typo.
2.it should be longer.
Yes
This needs a 5 and a 10 from me.
Not bad
Too short. I'd make it longer.
Also, what's up with the ending?
You only had 1 real word in that, and you mispelled it! At least spell check your submission...