((( VERY NICE WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
The art and graphics, are very good and i was amazed at how much you put into it with the decent filesize, i do think you had way too much "CREDITS" at the start and it took time away from the actual flash, also the animation was very slow, but in the end it was a very pleasent flash, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less credits, more smoother animation...

~~OVERALL~~
A great art flash good music but needs some fix's here and there...

~X~

really slow...

its a great song to start off with, you just kind of dragged it out.. :S you could have done so much more to keep the audience's attention. I started dazing off even before the credits were through.

I wonder why I liked it?

First of all, I did not like that fact that you said that you needed to be over 13 if you don't have a parent around, pg is for people over 7 (atleast here in England it is), but the reast I liked, it was gripping, I don't know why, but it was. You did the animation well, it consisted of good art. I really liked it, but i hate teasers, if I see a teaser I check newgrounds every day to see if the full one is released, oh well, great teaser, can't wait 'till the proper one comes out.

Like a true animator

I Felt Like I was watching a Miyazaki. please continue to flaunt your talents!

well,

first off the guy behind me was pretty stupid to judge a movei he didn't see. he was right on the fact that it was 75% intro. and there wasnt any adult themes or mild nudity(not like i was wanting that) so why did you bother puting up a screen of that? i really liked that type of animation though... it was very unique. and if it really was your first flash and you had no help besides tutorials then you did an excelent job.