Looks like you've got that whole camera pan and stick generator crap working fine there - but that's all you've got! Use the camera thing to better use, have characters that aren't poo. There isn't a story, it's just random sliding around etc. 17 objects too, bit too few for any impressive work - detail is where it's at. Why not use those techniques in the action sequence of something that has a point - the random stick thing has to be incredibly impressive to get anywhere these days.
To be honest with you, I was around 12 when I made this, so if you wanted something good with a story and some decent action sequences (surely misspelled that) you should at least cheack back in when I find the patience and enthusiasm to make another flash movie.
The camera pan I got from some flash tutorial (can't remember which) and I actually animated everything else fbf/tween myself.
I hate this creation of mine (although there are some good parts), so if you don't like it you'll just get a "Sure, what ever...".
Also, it was one of my first relatively completed flash movies, and my character insight and development wasn't that advanced (as I told you, I was TWELVE YEARS OLD when I made this). Got my point?
Actually, im suprised it didn't get blammed. I gave you a 1, it sucked pretty bad. but not quite a 0. If this is your first flash, you did great. If not, you should just give up making em.
'Twas my first succesful flash on NewGrounds, meaning it was the first that didn't get blammed. Quite frankly, I was surprised, too. Might remake it (although I've taken over 2 years to respond to the reviews)
It was O.K. I guess.
It needs a story behind it. That tells what happened to the big guy and all. I was kind of lost during this submission.
You might just get that story if I ever bother remaking it or making a sequel. Then again, I'm probably too lazy.
... the hell is that meant to be?
A bridge, how exciting. But what is the story line behind it? Why does a huge random block thing appear right near the end? What happened to the big dude? Why are you telling us anything?????
Because, this was my first [i]succesful[/i] flash movie on newgrounds.
I might continue it, though, if I find the enthusiasm to do it.