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Seriously needs improvement, draw more, practice more, and spend more time on your projects next time.

Must be improved

I must say the only thing that interested me here was the story.

crap

that was bullshit.no story,awful graphics,and boring.and those robot guys reminded me of the boss in thing-thing 2.overall,it comes down to 1 word.................junk

Just sucked outright

Nothing was really done right. Sound was lame, graphics were garbage, it was completely pointless and made absolutely no sense. This looks like the work of a 13 year old boy going through puberty who got beat up for the past week after school.
Come back with a better product and maybe you'll get a better rating.
//Psychon

Nice try for a first but.....

Have you ever heard of proof reading well take that concept and put it into flash this movie would be awsome if you touched up the backrounds characters and animations. It is an awsome concept but i cant give it a good rating because of the errors in your work. I am not saying i can do any better but i hope to see better from you because I know first hand flash 'ant easy and you did "OK" for a fisrt try.