Needs lots of work
Problem One... your sprite animation is much too slow to work with Revolutions-The soundtrack-
Problem Two...the idea is really dumb considering there is a video where some one ACTUALLY beats Mario in 11 minutes
Author Comments
This is my second flash video, It's pretty good. but I'm planing on get even better.
Nice job. What's next?
I liked Mario's moves when he flips and kicks the object away.
A few things to work on.
While it was an okay flash overall, however there are some things I would hope to look for in your future flashes:
Smoother animation. Bump the fps up to 24. It'll look a lot smoother and more impressive.
Some assembly of a plot. Flashes like these never get good scores, because there is no real point to them, which bores most viewers.
As with any animator, there is always room for improvement. I look forward to seeing improvement in your future works.
nice
that was pretty sweet, whered u get those sprites from?
yo, you gotta get me that song
i need some more music to ride my board to.
