Stupid Little Fly...
Imagine this setting. You are on the beach with your girlfriend. It is the most pastorl, romantic, and perfect scene imaginable. The champaigne is cold, the oysters are fresh, and the fruit with chocolate is sensuous. Then, just as things are beginning to warm up, a horsefly comes in and ruins the scene.
That shooter round was the ruination of an otherwise perfect flash. Yes, I suppose it COULD have been longer, but in many ways that what sequels are for. I must have tried that thing eight times in eight different ways before I finally figured out that the trick was to just stand there until you ran out of ammo, THEN crouch only to reload.
The thing with interactive comic books is that the mini-games should be entertaining, but should only offer a mild challenge, if I wanted to play a brink of alienation shooter, there are at least three that come to mind I could go to instead of this. The real power of an interactive comic book, should be the story. For the most part you captured the story well, and your shots were excellent.
In all, with a little smoothing of details , this franchise of flash will continue to grow, and we here at NG will continue to watch with admiration.