Not bad, but it needs work.

The punchline wasn't delivered the best, and the pace really drags, especially with the poor synching on the audio. Try setting the audio clips to event instead of stream. Also, you should draw your own backgrounds. Trace bitmapped backgrounds hurt my eyes. x_x On a different note, it really is most definitely not cool to take someone else's name, even if they have no flash. I know I spent two years before I could come up with a clock movie idea that could get through the portal. In addition you WILL NOT become an accepted member of the Clock Crew with a name that's already taken.

Umm..

It's okay I must say.
Noting too special or bad.
Just a clock movie.

I like the monotone clock voices

not much point to it as usual but so what,,,not bad

Constructive Criticism

Hi there,

Your animation was not bad!

In my opinion, the clock 'robot' voice is terribly overused. You would be able to put a lot more emotion into your characters if you used a real voice. It wouldn't be so monotone.

I'm sure your next submission will be even better!

Craig Schriver

Ha! Not bad at all

A small issue with sync and the tracebitmap was used a bit much, but overall a nice movie. Funny stuff, can't wait to see next one.