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Breakfast In Bed

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This is my first ever flash creation!! i am open to any and all comments, both positive and negative, as to help me hone in on my flash skills!

-just to point out, i DID intend to create this using the Rotoscoping effect, for my first computer art class requirement! Now that that baby step has helped me learn the basics of flash, i will move on to normal animation!

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-_- cant belive the score

Are you kiding me this is a master piece!!!
It almost like a movie recorded with a camera! so real
you can maybe add some more details. But this is your FIRST movie?
Dont listein to those dicks down there V !
You do know that people uswaly do crapy stickfiguer for there first movie.
I animate for 2 years but I don`t think I could animate that!
This deserves a score of : 3.75 ...

:( no smile on my face ):

not funny...

alright

that was pretty good 4 your 1st time so ill give it a 9

i gave it a 5

not bad, i like rotoscoping

it had a nice feel to the camera angles and everything, reminiscent of <I>waking life</I>

don't let the nay sayers get ya down, rotoscoping is cool, just make the content more interesting, a little more staging to the segments that u rotoscope, a story more simple than guys bring another guy breakfast in bed would be a start.

also simplify ur technique, but ensure that u get the detail there, may be impossible on a smaller computer unless u break the flash down into scenes, and also the detail may not be there if your shooting ur movie from a smaller digital camera, rent a digital handycam, or save up for it.
all in all, i look forward to seeing further submissions.

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad for your first animation, but you should compress it as much as you can especialy for your first animation, there was alot of shaking going on which was notbad but could be much smoother with more time, as for the art it was ok could use more details though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and compress the file size nobody likes a large movie some people dont even watch a large file, so in that aspect your draw away users from veiwing your work, so a little compression would improve on this...

~~OVERALL~~
A first time flash, notbad but could be better...

~X~

Credits & Info

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6,535
Votes
21
Score
3.29 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 5, 2006
9:29 PM EDT