I'd rather be honest...
I would. It's better being honest about this than lying to you. The only 'good' part I saw in all of that, was the part with the shadow people dancing, which was pretty damn well done. Well done to the point of wondering if they were really of your doing, or if you just 'Heavily inspired' (in other words copied) those parts off videos of people dancing in reality.
Now I know, I'm harsh, but you can either accept it and strive to become better, or be in denial, call me bad names and forever live in the shadow of....whoever it is you're trying to be.
Your anime scenes were bad. Honestly. Very....amateurish. I'd suggest heaps of research/practice on how to REALLY draw anime before even CONSIDERING looking for jobs in the/related to the art domain.
There are too many idiots out satisfied with their half-baked skills and making lame jap-type drawings for magazines and such. Don't be another one of 'em. Investors/Producers/Magazine Editors are already prejudiced against manga/anime because so many people use it (or should I say rape it), and only true masters of this form of art really stand a chance of breaking through the business with this style.
So yeah. Either get better or do something more meaningful with your life. It's up to you.