Meh. It was good.
The art was good, but the lack of sound effects kind of hurt it a bit. The music came out clear with no problem, and even though there was no plot, the drawings made it fun to watch for the few seconds it ran.
Author Comments
***Sorry about the file size; this was made before I knew about optimization and line efficiency... and such. It's an experimental movie.
Here's a little frame by frame movie I did in a couple of days. It's about an athlete who becomes corrupted and turns into a demon and then into ash. It's short, but detailed. That's why it's such a big file. Circumlocution is frightening.
tricolor responds:
Thank you. If you like puppets, watch the movie "Strings," if you haven't already.
I'm not really sure what the hell I just saw.
Okay, the file size was fine.
I'm not sure if you were trying to make a humor flash but if you did it wasn't that funny.
I really liked the style of the drawings in this flash espiecially, but you need color to make it a little more eye catching.
The problem with this was, I couldn't tell what was going on, it wasn't interesting, there wasn't any color, it was way too short, random in a bad way, and lacked effort.
A little advice is to color your flashes and when you do to make colors that mesh and are more eye grabbing.
You have good drawings and graphics but if you used a good color scheme you'd get a 9 or ten in graphics from me and other users.
_ Notorious
tricolor responds:
indeed. i was just kinda fuckin around on this one... got a bit bored. thanks for the tips. i'll keep the coloring in mind.
wow, great art work.
really great drawings, deep symbolism, over all, just plain great.
tricolor responds:
well thanks very much for the review. it's not the best animation, and my anatomy needs work in this one. so, keep your eyes open for a better submission by me. i also have stuff on deviantart under the name chtricolor.
thanks so much for another helpful review.
peace.
wow?
wow all your stuff is so deep and meaningful that i dont understand any of it.
god job none the less though and it does look good for a frame by frame
tricolor responds:
Thanks very much.... I wish you understood this one, though! The basic conclusion of this movie is that, no matter how corrupt the athlete gets, the football still lies within him (since that's what he started off with). Cheers.
Nice basic story
Very simple graphics-wise yet it's satisfying, nice work. I like the athlete concept. A ton of potential for the future if you continue the good work!
tricolor responds:
Thanks... I'm glad you liked the artwork. I look forward to the future, too.
Peace and out.
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