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gd try mate, reminds me very much of the first Duke Nukem game. couple of things:

YOU NEED SOUND
The intros not happening, in the sense that its just not there!

bout it really dude, sort these and your gold

Tropical island platformer

A competently-executed platformer with decent artwork. It's very rough around the edges and lacks variation, but improvements will no doubt be forthcoming.

The art style was simplistic, but decent. The animation, however, could use quite a bit of improvement. The walk cycle alone was somewhat ridiculous: the character gets as far as the breakdown, and then switches back again, like a skip or chasse'. It seems very strange, and is mimicked in the arm movement, which is jerky. Jumping isn't quite as bad, but could use work as well.

The scripting was great as far as I could tell, with the exception of opponent AI. There was no skill involved in standing beneath the opponents and shooting up at them; they never moved except to die, and couldn't aim.

The level was incomplete--at the end you simply keep walking forever. The intro doesn't exist, I was waiting for several seconds for a poorly-timed fade in that never came. It's just a black screen.

Scripting was smooth, it wasn't painful to look at, but it's clearly not finished. A decent rough draft, I suppose. I await the final version.

Nice work

Normally I'd be rough on an entry like this, but given that you guys are as young as you are I'm very impressed. Please don't take that as a bad thing. You guys have a lot of potential to be producing work like this at your age. Don't be discouraged if the people of Newgrounds are rough on this submission. Keep at it. You guys have a lot of great work ahaed of you.

addictive =)

i really like it =) shows that you have real skill at flash and you have the potential to go far, spend a bit more time on the graphics and you will be able to be a really good artist!

Not the best game ever

It could be improved my making it a bit harder