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A fight without meaning

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Hi everyone! I decided to make a little movie in flash, just to test my skills, although it doesn´t have a story watch it anyway and see if you like it!:P

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Nice

it was nice but you could have put a better ending on and the stickman fight could have better moves AND it could have been longer.

still a good one though

Hmm

Well you need to avoid using the standard 'blue-black' gradient fill, edit it to 'blue-darker blue' or something that makes it look better. At one point your background edge is clearly inside the stage, need to fix errors like that too. Increase framerate to at least 18fps for this kind of thing. Need a conclusion, or at least a real cliffhanger.. Faster action such as the eyes opening and all that, it was just too slow in those places. Just some stuff to work with if you're interested in taking your flash animations to a higher level - it was a pretty good effort though, well done. I liked that you gave the sticks bandanas and had their eyes in it - its a small difference from other stick movies, which is all you need really to get the originality points there.

Not bad, but could be better.

Basically, it needs a better ending. I mean, I kinda despise cliffhangers. And if there was more open space so the fight could stretch out, then might seem cooler.
Anyway, I say that it was nice, but needs a bit of work.

Pretty good ^_^

I liked the music and the overall feel of it. Although alot of people will downrate you just for using stick figures so I sudjest adding more detail to the characters. Maybe speed the action up and lengthin the movie would make it seem a little more action packed though ^_^. Good job man and keep up the good work

POW!

I liked it. Although, I must say that it was disapointingly short and nobody died a bloody death...
Infact, the lack of overall blood really dissapointed me. Still though, no blood is better than crappy blood, so if you think you couldn't do good blood, then you made a good choice.

Make it longer, and have someone be the winner with a grand scene to display their victory. That's the key.

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Mar 21, 2006
7:04 PM EST