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This is one to think about. Please rate it and I hope you enjoy it. I added a voice track to this one, as my last entry was lacking, i hope it helps.
I made the loop from a Lemon Jelly song - Elements, from the album Lost Horizons...
I Appreciate the Message...
but you really need to touch up the graphics, get your audio in sync, and get a better mic. The story was decent, but your lack of flash skill made it tough to sit through the whole movie. Nice try, keep at it.
1.75/5.00, D, 66/100
Work at it
I kind of like your style although theres not much animation. Like the previous reviewer the loopback annoyed me as well. Also the voice didn't go with the animation or the subtitles, you need to fix the the synch there. Though that story telling bit can work if you put a little more detail in animation and such. But yeah keep up the good work and you'll get it ;)
Don't like it, nor hate it
Okay, a guy tells his story, nice, but the sound was not good looped for a background sound, maybe you should'v chosen a song that was as long as the movie, cause it got irritating after a while, repetativly hearing that stop and beginning, you can hear the lloop to much, so try fixing this, for the rest, lack of action.
Psycho Much
But still actually very likeable, I do hope its just your imagination though, Otherwise its extremly worrying.
Believe it or not...
... I actually really liked your Short. The lip sync was fine in the first few lines, but lost its sync afterwards. Your whole ideal was great, you should definitely rework this and resubmit if it doesn't make it through.