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Thomas and Jesse have a lovely conversation about facial hair

-Well, my first SHORT cartoon, im gonna take a break for several days before a LONG one comes by and hits me in the noggin, Thomas and Jesse are real people, accually just me and my friend, but anyways... Enjoy
IT IS SUPPOSED TO BE RANDOM AND CONFUSING.... kind of

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Interesting

So I found this one to be interesting, you really put some effort into it and it keeps my interest, so that I did not get bored easily wich I can tend to do in some of these flashes, but with this one you did ok, so its a good presentation, nice all around. I like the subtitles, and the artsy like characters it was the "SOUND" that was kinda low sounding, but other then that it was entertaining You a hve a decent flash here, but there there is still some room for improvments even a few little things here and there, but in the end it can only help you and make your flash much better and again in the end more enjoyble for all who see it such as myself.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So there is always some idea that can change things for the better, And all it takes is a small change here or there, I will be gladly to offer some tips and tricks here for some possible improvments. I think the sound was the only issue here that and maybe it could be a tad longer.

~X~

I don't what to say

This is a very unusual flash, but I will say I liked the art shift and the ending with the random stick figure and violence! The eyes were cool and funny at least. Wish I knew what was going on.

I like

mustaches.

It was a nice little submission. Very cute and funny. I think you did okay with the whole thing however i can't say it's good nor can i say it's bad it's just okay. id have to say it's "Predictably Random".A 7/10

lol

after i first watched i couldnt stop laughing, the sound was good, the script couldn't have been better, and the way that everything happened for no particular reason was true greatness.

I know the last reviewer was drunk....

but the big question is were YOU drunk when you wrote the script? Were you high? It made no sense. I think I know what you are going for, but if it is what I'm thinking, you were way off. The graphics weren't too bad, and the sound was fine.
The violence made no sense at all. Some guy sticks his head in (I was expecting it to be the grandfather (mother's uncle's dad)) but I never found out, because inexplicably a box crushes his head. Then the guy stands up and breaks in half, I didn't even see what did that, then a car rams into the room!
WTF?
Avenging Angel

biocarrotproductions responds:

i wasnt drunk but i DID write it in the wee hours of the morning

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Mar 17, 2006
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