Good idea, but kind of quiet

3/5

I liked the idea behind this. Hopefully not entirely based on real life. I also liked the music (of course, since most of it was mine :) )

There were some issues though. Voice acting would definitely have improved this. The dialogue bubbles were good and well-timed, but no one wants to read an animated cartoon. The music was also a little on the quiet side, and the lack of sound effects was noticeable. The pacing could have been a lot snappier.

But these are minor issues that can be easily fixed, and I look forward to your future work.

funny as hell

Chris this animation had me laughing for hours lol very well animated keep it up:)

it was ok

add some voices and it will be much better. also, what was that last one when he is chaseing after that crosswalker, what happened to him? well whatever it was funny the first time.

ehhh..

sound was quiet

Pretty

Pretty good. Well drawn, nice idea, original work... Nice job!