don't listen to mackid
he has no sense of humor. this was funny as hell. great flash. keep it up.
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The year is 1953. KGB agent is going to take down the nuclear-bomb factory =). There wont be second a a second part of this.
Sucks.
0/5
Because...
A. Why would a KGB agent break into a "nuclear bomb factory" that has soldiers with AK-47s?
B. Why would American soldiers have AK-47s?
C. Why does your animation of a parachute suck?
D. Why do you have no ability to draw a guy landing after parachuting down?
E. How would a KGB agent parachute into the US?
F. Why does his pistol look like a Beretta?
G. Why does he have an uzi in his bag? The Uzi was first designed in 1951 but it was for the ISRAELIS not for export, as far as I know, at that time!
H. The sounds sucks...
Intsz responds:
I started this flash as a simple tween-practice so there isnt real plot on this one. Actually I wrote this plot in 5 sec :).
To mackid: The KGB had these weapons way before ;). Most of the flaws you brought up are just dumb. You are amazing, I think you actually searched the web for finding the design year of that uzi. Silly dumbass.
go go kgb
nice animation there man, with the grainyness n that, hav u tried it in black and white to see how it looks? anyways, the sound effects were ace. load n clear with no crackle or anything very impressed the only issue i have was with the soundtrack, christ man it got sooooooooooooooooooooo annoying hearing that loop over and over and you hadnt beat matched it so everytime the loop began it was a lil out of sync, if you can't do audio man ask someone on this site can, hell im a music producer i'd do it for you, anyways it was a cool animation, the story was a lil on the short side a part two wud be gud, anyways keep it up hoe to see more of your stuff.
Intsz responds:
Haven't tried black&white... think it would fit better, it would hide my graphics a bit ;)
its ok..
uhmmm good try......i would say the problem is the speed of the animation or it might just b my internet connection ...but still ...try to get bettter illustration and im sure ull make it.
Needs More...
I liked this Flash.
You could clean the animation up and add some extra detail. But it looked good. The shapes, backgrounds, motion, and detail were all well done. The animation was pretty good, simple tweens and motion loops... you could slap more FBF in for a smoother look (I know, more work). The colors were good, as was the weapon design. The weakest point was your faces, which is everyone's problem.
Sound was okay. The effects were good, and well timed. But L4v1 said it - that loop gets old pretty fast. Although it was a good choice for the movie, so I'll give you that.
The story so far is okay. It certainly needs to be finished. Left me hanging big time. Keep these fuckers going - this one was good.
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