Some important pointers you need to consider

Influences:
David Firth.

It was basically Salad Fingers with a different character and not great music. Come up with something more original.

And the Might Boosh 'influence' was basically Salad Fingers crossed with Tommy.

And the Alice in Wonderland 'influence' was the eating of something and changing size etc.

You should definitely consider coming up with your own ideas and being influenced by things because 'influence' to you means ripping straight from something. To everyone else that's called copying.

Good job

Graphics: 7 :Everything moved decently and the characters looked alright.
Style: 9 :Interesting style that has a very dark feel throughout.
Sound: 3 :The sound should have been mixed better. Sometimes the volume of the music over powered what the main character was saying.
Violence: 1 :Has a tiny amount of blood.
Interactivity: 0 :Movie
Humor: 0 :Not every submission on Newgrounds is intended to be funny.
Overall: 7 :This animation was pretty good, the only thing that was bothering me was the sound.

Disgustingly Bad

The title says it all.

Nice imagination

Kool, hope to see more.

Meh.

It was alright. Rather creepy though in my opinion. Maybe just work on the animation a bit.