Needs a lot of work.
The graphics were as a basic as possible and extremely sketchy.
And the colors weren't meshed at all. You need to work on your color scheme.
I liked the idea of this which is why I gave it a 2/5 but the way it was done didn't have enough effort for anything close to a 3/5.
The movement and flow was really screwed up too.
The sound I liked but I think you might have wanted to choose a more classic newgrounds audio.
For a beginning flash it's good.
The style of your drawing seemed to stay the same in your flashes.
I'm sure you'll probaly end up deleting this because your going to get really good at flash.
Anyway I'm going to go check out and review your other flashes. :)