XD, TW@
10 for violence because of cruelty to pies.
was not bad though considering its graphics were a bit crappy.
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Wow our first flash remember this is our first installment
for an amazing genre it does,nt look good in animation because it did'nt take us long once our second installment comes well show you our real drawing talent with smoothing animations and colour and sound effects and even more pie!
made me laugh at loud at some parts
i didnt enjoy the fact that it was black and white--althogh the contraversal situations made me laugh--except pie humar died when we grew past the age of 12--just take this constructive critisisum so you can make your next batch of cartoons past judgement if this one doesnt
PIE!!!!!!!!!!!
Good but not great hoping for the results for the next episode.
And if you replie to this can you set up a link or somthing for the
tune/music in the background plz!
-TWW-
Hmmm.....
Obviously the graphics need a little improvement, just a little though, I like comedy that has simple characters. And add some color, color is good. White backgrounds need to go too.
The sound was intersting enough to keep me watching, even though it seemed completely detached from the movie. Work on that, make the music match the movie better. The soundtrack is fine, the dramatic stuff works for this kind of comedy, but it needs to FIT.
Some of the comedy wasn't all that spectacular, the jokes revolved around outdated "OMG!" type stuff.
I have a strong suspicion that this will get blammed, and probably rightly so (major points are lost on just having black and white), but I'm a nice guy.....
3/5
Cru-Void responds:
Yeh, this is the first one so the next one will have colour, animation and we wanted to see the responce to ensure we can advance the series. I know it ain't spectacular but the pie f'in was pretty funny...
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