alright... massive potential.

This submission, has by far the most unused potential that I have ever seen. However I still had to give it a shitty grade because the graphics sucked, the violence was choppy, and the sketching lacked the massive amounts of creativity and invention required to make a pencil sketch movie. I fucking loved the music and the ending would have much more style if the guy didn't fall of the line and ... some romance scene made to fit the music. you do all these things and I personally guarrantee you will get the Front Page.

PS. I'm not saying that there should be no violence or humor in this flash, just know when it's the right time for each quality and follow this motto: "when using violence or humor, make sure each are of the highest quality. If it's taped together, you might as well not use any at all.

Good job

I liked it, iv never seen the first one but it was very funny i hope you make more!!

I would liked it to have been longer and a little more interesting tho

Great flash

I really love the sketch flash movies.

I laughed very hard when I saw the eraser shrink and grow to fit the drawings.

There is one thing that I would like to see different, I would make the pencil do the coloring too (the ball and the dress).

Can't wait for another one.

Nice

Smooth flash. It kinda reminds me of a flash animation called Pencilmation, but only the graphics, the pencil and the drawings are different. The music is fun and the drawings are nice. The bomb looks like a bomb-omb without legs. Nice animation.

I got a bit of a chuckle out of this

Really funny, though I think the length of it could have been longer.

Graphics I guess can't really be improved, were talking a pencil on paper like graphics.

Style was random, which added to the humour somewhat.

Sound was decent for the animation

Violence was minimal

Humour was outright funny, just cause of how random it was. It also reminds me of when I doodled on paper as a kid.