crap
that was shit dont continue it
Author Comments
Take a break from the murder and mayhem for a few minutes...
tfchuck responds:
I've taken everyones criticisms (except those who've told me to never make another movie--haha) and finished it... remember, this flashpoetry stuff isn't for everyone cause it's kind of slow so be kind to me with your reviews.
~chuck
Very nice
Very nice man.Cant wait till the next one.And for the last guy that reviewed it its not about a war you frikin retarded idiot.
was it supposed to be summat
Wasnt this supposed to be a poem, its just 3 elongated lines of random text, probably about a war
Not much reward....
It could have been good, but it seemed like I waited a long time for three lines of poetry, followed by a to be continued.
mehehehehheheheh!
i liked this.... no wait, i loved this!!!!
why?
i really wish i knew....
it was a bit boring but otherwise rock on and stuff!
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