good shit
good shit
Author Comments
Hey this is the second part to the other "film" Sheep take over the World :) The 2nd last scene is inspired by a certain movie *cough* Reservoir Dogs *cough*. Thanks for checking this out and be sure to review it because I respond to them all now :D Ta. NEW ZEALAND PRIDE!!!
not funny
and you spelled "beaten" wrong.
jonesynz responds:
I see the spelling police are out in force tonight... Ok I'll sort it out. Cheers
Just Bad
No real attempt at making this seem funny. I mean... its SHEEP KILLING GEORGE FRIKIN BUSH here. You could have done so much to just make an attempt.
Seriously though... learn to sync the lips a little better, and get rid of the paint shop blood... lines arent real. Spray is real.
Hopefully your next submission is atleast better than this one.
jonesynz responds:
OK i dont get what you mean by "its SHEEP KILLING GEORGE FRIKIN BUSH here" thats the whole point.. thanks for spotting that one sherlock. And yeah lips arnt my forte.
huh?
its a story about a sheep who wants to be on tv to take over the world and then kills george bush? who the hell came up with this stupid idea? the sound is bad, the story is bad, aargh!
jonesynz responds:
Well.... I came up with the idea... I thought that was obvious... Im the author...
Hmm..
With all the work that went into that, I don't understand why you wouldn't bother a spell check. The sound really needs to be fixed as well.
jonesynz responds:
Thanks heaps, yeah I know about the spelling now but I was running on a deadline :P Ill fix it up an reupload