not bad
well, the graphic looks ok to me
Author Comments
Ace is an alien and the monsters attacking him are actually Sand Raiders. Sorry for noy indicating that in the movie.
I know it isn't well done but what can you expect from a thirteen years old kid? And this is actually done in 4 days!
The music used is from Star Wars Galaticbattlegrounds the game.
Reviews are very welcomed.
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Lol.. all the sounds where made with your mouth, right?
Ehh... You animate pretty well, but the graphics were quite bad.
I didn't like it, but there are lots and lots of worst things in the portal.
Erikcq
am a sw fan so i was interested......
your graphics werent what i expected them to be but at least you tried......nice lightsaber combat
Dong-Tanks responds:
A lot of reviews are about the poor graphics. I was atually kinda rushing as I wouldn't have any more time when school reopens. The end of the holiday is near! Sorry about the graphics and I will work harder. Thank you.
not bad for a 13 year old.
graphics could be improved, a lot.
those (apparently) tusken raiders looked more like very strange cats, but again for a 4 day project it is alright
p.s next time spend a bit more time on it.
Dong-Tanks responds:
It is not tusken raiders actually, they are Sand Raiders, a creature I created.
Here we go...
What you did well:
I think that your combat animation for the most part was pretty smooth. Work on your art skills a bit and you'll make some crazy good stuff.
What you need work on:
A better script, and I just don't mean story. Plot out the battles a bit more, make them longer, and fun to watch.
Conclusion:
Not terrible. I see a lot of promise in this work. Keep it up and you'll rock the front page one day for sure.
Dong-Tanks responds:
Thanks! I like reviews like this. Thanks for the encouragement.
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