okay

it was an alright animation, a bit random and short, but it was alright for your first animation. i would suggest browsing the audio portal and some of the tutorials here on NG.... they will be able to help you out with your future flashwork.

A good first effort.

It's not great, but it sure as hell doesn't deserve being blammed. You have got potential, put a little more practice in and you will be crafting brilliant flash pieces in no time. :)

wtf

WTF happened to his ear. The only reason i gave this piece of crap a 1 on humour is because of those rats.lol.

OTHER THAN THAT IT SUCKED!!!!

You're off on a good foot

At first, I thought you were just having an "emo" moment in the morning :P

The main thing that got me was the voice. It was difficult to hear what he said at some points. Other than that, keep up the good work.

Just barely mediocre.

I was so ready to blam this thing, but the silly twist ending saves it.