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where does the "kao" come in?
Author Comments
I dont know what you think but, I want to thank all the tutorials I studied pretty hard and this flash took me nearly 2 weeks!!!!! I dont know if it's good but plz leave comments if you have any helpful pointers I only hope to be as good as Proxicide and Zhu in the future but i need all the help given to me right now.....Anyway enjoy........
Nice work!
Hey man, for your first try, this was pretty good. I had a few complaints like the others so I won't bore you with them. Other than that, keep at it, I'm sure you'll rock us all with your next bit of work.
Nice storyline but...
The beginning plot was nice, sounds like you might be making a few of these!
I know you've heard this a couple times, but you should have the 'continue' button in the same place, so you don't have to follow the text around. Also, the fight scene went kind of slowly...
Looking forward to the next one though, it's got the potential to be a pretty good series! =D
((( NOTBAD )))
~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, the sprites abit small but still ok, i didnt like the whole buton clicking it just got anoying after abit, but as the story progressed it did get better, so i did like it...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the sprites abit larger, Instead of using butons to proceed to the next msg, just have it flow as a movie, viewers may get anoyed at always having to press the button...
~~OVERALL~~
Fun sonic sprite flash, could be abit better in sprite sharpness, but overall i liked it...
~X~
keep practicing
it was good for a 1st try, but still lackin' keep workin at it
