((( THIS WAS DIFFERENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat abit different, good animation with the running, very smooth, and some nice characters, maybe add some more color though, and the "MUSIC" was just right for this, anyways good animation, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More color would be cool...

~~OVERALL~~
A very entertaining animation, good smooth animation and neat plot, great work...

~X~

Rip-Offs of good artists are disappointments..ugh

I am sorry sir, but your flash was unorigional (hence the 0 in style), the graphics were poor (3 in graphics), the sound quality was dreadful (1 in sound), violence 0 (was no violence), interactivity = 2 (for the loading button), humor was 0 (was not enjoyable to any degree).

Here is what I reccomend you to do:
1. Do not make parodies off of good artists unless you can make them enjoyable by the audience.
2. You need to get what's called a tablet, they help you draw so much better than a mouse and I think it would really help you out in your flashes.
3. Your style of drawing is YOURS, and you wouldn't like it if somebody made a crappy knock-off off of one of your flashes, so don't do it to others.
4. Just put a bit more effort in the coloration and shading as well as tweening and movement.

How about not.

As my little sister would say: this is NO.

U ruin it!

I seen the orginal and u ruin the entire flash by adding your own english text in place of the orginal japanese one.

I love the orginal but u by editing out the japanese text and stuff, I dun think u even had permission from the guy who did this to edit his flash so detastefully.

WAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAAHAHHAA

THAT WAS HILARIOUS!! FREAKY hilarious.. it was funny and scary at the same time!
pretty kool