OK, i guess

You can make it better with a better worked animation and voice... That should help a lot. :X

((( DECENT WORK )))

This was decent work, the "VOICES" really cameout well like with the eyes getting larger and such, the flash could be longer though cause it does have promise just abit short though, overall nice work, keep it up...

~X~

okay

not too bad or good. your efforts were alright in this one, but it was pretty random and not all that interesting.

good for a first

the graphics where sketchy and the voice was hopeless but you got your point across.

well...

it needs to be longer. and also the sound is messed up. you really can't tell what it is he is saying. the grahics look ok, just need a little more work. good job, just but some time into a few things and it'll be better.