good movie
well, i did find the storyline to be somewhat disturbing, but it was also fairly original and it was entertaining too. i liked the drawings and the audio from the audio portal in this one.
overall, it was a pretty good flash. i liked it.
Author Comments
This storyline is a bit disturbing. If you intend to leave critical reviews they are welcome but please back your reason up and not just say you suck that was horrible. Please leave useful reviews and tell me what you think of my artwork hope you enjoy. :)
twas most radical
this might go on my favorites,make more flash, but i think youshould of made it longer,but oh wells,still great toonskie
This will nab the 18-34 young male demo
The most important thing to work on would be the detail of the art. Especially in concerns to the panty-views on the 2 women, right now they look like diapers. Disregard any negative reviews concerning taste or your psychological well-being. I encourage you to develope this idea. As far as sound goes, I think you should only add sounds that the shooter can hear, such as the shuffling of his bag and the gun discharges, but no sound from bullet impacts or screams (because they're too far away). This flash has guts, and I mean that as a double entendre. I like how it tosses the viewer right into the scene with no explanations or reasons.
hmmm
I think I'm one of the few people who doesn't think you're a psycopath, pal. Still, it seemed like pointless violence. This could have been all emotional and stuff, but it didn't have much a a point. And who honestly, when their mom has been shot, starts sniffling? More like "OH MY GOD MY MOM HAS BEEN SHOT!!!!" hysterics. The graphics definately need a lot of improvement. Not bad for a first attempt, but you need to rethink your style, in my opinion.
S-M-films responds:
If a 5 year old saw his mom get shot he would probably cry since little children wouldnt exactly know what happened. You would be right if it was her husband then i would have had him be shocked instead of crying.
Please no more sob stories.
If Hollywood has taught us anything, hundreds of sob movies a flash does not make. I can't take anymore of these "OMG" flashes. If you have a problem, go write a book.
4 tears out of 10.
S-M-films responds:
This flash is another one im progressing with i just made it to test death graphics. I also wanted to try some fbf it wasnt actually ment to be super good.Just somethin i made in a few hours. And if you think that then why did u waste your time watching and reviewing it. Why dont you do ME a favor and leave a helpful review not just one saying no more like this. Did you even read my comments i said no bull shit reviews like your retarded one. You need to stop worrying so much about my movies and go do something better urself. Oh and whats that you have no flash. Thus you ahouldnt talk bad about mine so why dont you take a pitchfork and shove it up ur dickhole you fucking faggot!!!!
