i cant understand them

I dont know what they are saying, get a better micraphone

5

The concept is a character trying to pick up on a hot tamale of the opposite sex, using his best pick-up line hoping that everything will work out in his favor. I love short movies that pack a big punch in the end. The set-up is probably the most important thing, that and the outcome for the joke and it's punchline for a close second. The artwork really could use some help. While the characters were satisfactory, their overall design could use some touching up - mabe a little fine tuning to make the difference. I liked the audio for a little while, the echoing was so that the inner monolouge for the character would appear different than the regular one. For some odd reason, it was a little on silent side, maybe the microphone or recording service was faulty. Not a bad start, will you be making a series?

Ryan

pretty good

I dont know I just didnt love it. I couldnt really tell what he was thinking because the music was so loud. though it was pretty funny. Not great. I liked it though pretty good

haha

hey wanna get some pizza and fuck?

whats wrong you dont like pizza

lol

it was ok I relly couldent tell what was going on but it was good tough.